Ooh! This one came relatively quickly this evening. It is a bit annoying because my aim this evening was to finish off one of the numerous crashed-and-burned attempts from the past three weeks ("Saint Then Sinner Then Saint Again" just isn't getting finished, as much as I would like it to be). I thought that might be more efficient than starting off something new. No such luck.
It is just intended to be a delivery system for the (I think) pleasant "lilac moon" refrain. If it succeeds on those terms then I'm happy.
I was wondering whether to extend it by repeating those four chords before the false ending (spoilers!) and phasered guitar a bit and singing something over it, but I think its too slight for that, so just kept that moment brief as a bit of variation.
D̶r̶u̶n̶k̶ ̶l̶i̶k̶e̶ ̶t̶h̶e̶ ̶w̶a̶t̶e̶r̶
Blood in the water
Sharp like a tongue
Blunt as a daughter
Black as a lung
Old like a rumour
Red like a rose
D̶r̶y̶ ̶a̶s̶ ̶a̶ ̶h̶u̶m̶o̶u̶r̶
Dry as good humor
Plain as the nose
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